Write a story using the words: grapes, drums, lion, paper and airplane.
Once upon a time there lived on the mountains a hungry mighty lion. Everyday the mighty lion would head out hunting for delicious meat. Hunting meat was hard work for the mighty lion so he decided to become a vegetarian. The lion then ate all the grapes in the wild. After the lion ate three hundred grapes he went back home to the mountains to play. He went into his room and saw a piece of paper on the ground then he got an idea. He picked up the piece of paper with his paw and made a paper airplane. After he made it he started throwing it around. He got a bit tired of the airplane until he heard a drum sound banging. He started to get excited listening to the drum that he did a tiktok dance. Eventually the mighty lion became dizzy from all the tiktok dances he fell asleep with his paper airplane in his paw. THE END.
That's a great story, Akesa! Well done!
ReplyDeleteThank you miss Adina
DeleteHi Akesa, what a lovely story you have written. I like the way the events are relatable and fun to read. I wondered as I read what I lion might say as he ate, folded and dance. I also had an ideas that you could make this into a picture book perhaps on Google slides and share it with a year 1 class when we returned to school. What do you think?
ReplyDeleteKeep up the creative and thoughtful writing Akesa.
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